love is like a mass of liquid droplets
and frozen crystals falling
in seasons,
new, young, old,
spring, summer, fall, winter
and again
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2 responses to “Clouds”
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The seasons and droplets of love are wonderful and I love how you ended it with “again” which resonates with the never ending experience of love and giving and countless drops in all seasons. Really compact and concise piece packed with resonance. Thank you!!
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Thank you, Cynthia, for sitting with all these poem-attempts and spending time with them, close-reading, and commenting. You are a dear friend! So amazed and happy at how God brought us together all those years ago 😉
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Amy Secrist 
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